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This is my newest Yautja picture and it is of my beloved RP character, Rakai'Thwei. Originally, this picture was meant to be a nudie but if my Mom were to find this picture, she'd think I'm drawing hentai or something so instead, I had to make do with Speedo like clothing. This is my first time in drawing a profile view and I am trying really hard in trying to draw bodies.
Please comment and offer suggestions!
Please comment and offer suggestions!
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Hah, okay, wasn't sure. I know people get offended sometimes. 
Well, to start out, I'd say you did very well with the upper body, it's well proportioned. The fist, though, is a tad too small. The shoulder should be brough up to the collar bone, and the arm, to proportion it after doing that, would have to be lengthened a little. I love the way you did the torso itself, though. A tip to use is to try and measure your body to see where things meet, so you can measure it without actually using a visual reference. Like, if you pull your knee up to your chest, and sit up as straight as you can, you can see the measurement for how long the thigh should be in comparison to the torso. And do the same thing to your calf, pull it up to your thigh, and see where things start and end on your leg/foot. It makes it a lot easier. 
Sorry this got to be so lengthy. 
Overall, you seem to have a pretty good grasp on anatomy. With a little work you could perfect it! 
(and by this critique I am in no way saying I'm perfect at it )
Well, to start out, I'd say you did very well with the upper body, it's well proportioned. The fist, though, is a tad too small. The shoulder should be brough up to the collar bone, and the arm, to proportion it after doing that, would have to be lengthened a little. I love the way you did the torso itself, though. A tip to use is to try and measure your body to see where things meet, so you can measure it without actually using a visual reference. Like, if you pull your knee up to your chest, and sit up as straight as you can, you can see the measurement for how long the thigh should be in comparison to the torso. And do the same thing to your calf, pull it up to your thigh, and see where things start and end on your leg/foot. It makes it a lot easier. Sorry this got to be so lengthy. Overall, you seem to have a pretty good grasp on anatomy. With a little work you could perfect it! (and by this critique I am in no way saying I'm perfect at it )